Great story Alena, I really like it. You keep all your characters in-character, and they behave in a very elvish manner. That is something rather rare in silmfic, so my compliments on what few achieve. Not to mention I like how closely you follow canon, which is something I have a personal preference for ;)

Good use of language, too, I appreciate how eloquently and respectfully the characters talk to each other; that is another thing I often lack in fanfiction. Just one typo- 'Dor-Lómin' for 'Dor-Lomín'.

Great job, I look forward to your future fics! (I'd love to read a similar story as a continuation of this one, dealing with Finrod's return, as something more upcheering... I felt really sorry for Eärwen in this one ;) )