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Very well done for a first story in another language! It is an interesting idea that the Elessar was originally made for Fingolfin.

I think in the version (or in one of the versions?) in which Feanor is the one who created the Elessar he actually makes two stones, a green and a red one. That the Elessar should be one of a pair seems to fit in well with your ideas...

(I think you might want to say "contended against it" rather than "contended it".)

Thank you very much for the review! And I have corrected the mistake - thank you again for pointing it out! 

I do not have first-hand knowledge about the Elessar in canon (haven't finished reading the HoME series yet). In Cirdan's story Paradise Lost, it was paired with Elennar, while one of my friends told me confidently it was alone in Tolkien's works. I'd better quicken my pace of reading to check the fact myself :)