By Eru and all the Ainur this is truely the story I've been waiting for. Marvelous and well done. Of all my studies and hopes this is indeed a blessing onto the lords of Arda. Hail, hail, hail elf friend. This is a tale for which all the facolties of my founded knolidge rise in graditude for and in the utmost thanks. Please, please, please expand further and continue to develp tales like these. You have a gift and the art is with you. Thank you for you have made this evening well in that here is a gem, a shining star amung stories.

Very nicely done! I see that you have spent much effort working out the details of the story. A truly impressive work. Please continue! I would enjoy hearing your version of the War of the Last Alliance and Gil-Galad's part in all of it.