Well told! It's clear you've spent a lot of thought on the detail of life at Amon Ereb.

(I've reviewed before, on ffn, but nonetheless, here goes:)
You are goods with cliff hangers, and you proved it once again. I feel the story is now starting to roll forward, now with the added drama of Earendil in the sky and Maglor's secrets. After the timeskip the differences between Elrond and Elros have become even clearer - easier, in my opinion to understand their choices of mortality now than in the earliest chapters (when Elrond was more grudging against the Elves), so you built up that very well.

I absolutely love this story. I really hope you finish it. 

Your Elrond clings as fiercely to Maglor now as he rejected him at first!

That is a lovely ending.