Sonnet- Maedhros to Fingon by avi17
Fanwork Notes
Fanwork Information
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Summary: For B2MeM 2012. Prompts- "Grief," "Childhood Sweethearts," and "Unconditional Love." Major Characters: Fingon, Maedhros Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry, Slash/Femslash Challenges: B2MeM 2012 Rating: General Warnings: |
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| Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 103 |
| Posted on 5 March 2012 | Updated on 5 March 2012 |
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This fanwork is a work in progress. | |
Chapter 1
Yep, I wrote a slashy sonnet. (Actually I'm not the first person to do that for this couple, though I'd have to go find the other one. XD) I actually ended up quite liking this...now I want to do a response one back from Fingon.
I love sonnets, I feel like they're a perfect little poetry package. <3
Read Chapter 1
I met you as a child with plaited hair,
And wildness that I soon grew to adore.
Your ringing laughter echoed through the air
In joyous days when we did not know war.
Just when we felt our future was assured,
I lost you when our haven turned to black.
Through fire, ice, and shackles love endured-
You cut me out of hell and brought me back.
Since broken on the battlefield you lie,
What of my soul remains is now consumed
By guilt, for though I left you there to die,
My heart with yours will ever be entombed.
Without you, dearest cousin, lover, friend,
I may live on, but I will never mend.
Chapter End Notes
No flames, please. If you are adamantly against non-explicit mentions of slash (oh noes), please keep it to yourself or don't read.
If you liked it, please leave feedback. :)
(1) Comment by Himring for Sonnet- Maedhros to Fin... [Ch 1]
My favourite line here is:
You cut me out of hell and brought me back.
(You are highly unlikely to be flamed for non-explicit mentions of slash on this site! But if it ever does happen, you should inform the moderators.)
(2) Comment by oshun for Sonnet- Maedhros to Fingon [Ch 1]
I like it! It is tender and heartbreaking without making Maedhros chewing-carpet insame. Some day I am going to write the story of Maedhros at Unnumbered Tears and realizing that Fingon has been felled. Thanks for sharing.
(Don't worry about flames for slashy poetry here--we have a Dragon that breathes industrial strength flame retardant. Not that he has ever been needed.)