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I am enjoying your vivid descriptions of the boats, the voyage, and of Middle-earth, as well as the style of your language that is very appropriate to the Silm and the background of the politics of the last days of Numenor.   You're setting up some interesting characters to explore all the politics of the time.  I feel for the plight of the slaves.  And I'm enjoying your Adûnaic names.  It would be great to have the translations in your chapter notes and a list of the characters which would help keep track of who is who.  Great beginning!

Thank you very, very much elfscribe for taking the time to review my story. It really means a lot to me. The story is definately going to be long because I want to take it all the way to the fall of Numenor itself and beyond, even reaching the battle of the Last Alliance. I shall certainly heed your suggestions and put translations in my chapter notes.

Once again, thanks for your wonderful review.