Finrod's Promise by Himring
Fanwork Notes
Written for the LOTR Community Challenge Poetry 2013 and dedicated to Oshun as a belated birthday gift.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Finrod Felagund is rather more hopeful than his sister Galadriel. A re-mix of Galadriel's Namarie (the English version), supposed to be spoken by Finrod. It is up to the reader to decide who he is addressing. Major Characters: Finrod Felagund Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Duel of Songs Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 102 |
Posted on 24 April 2013 | Updated on 24 April 2013 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Finrod's Promise
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You will see Valinor; even you will see Valinor.
Although the Kindler from Mount Everwhite
has uplifted her hands like clouds—even though
all paths be drowned deep in shadow—
Valimar is not lost to those from the East.
You shall see Valinor. Even you shall see it!
Although darkness lie on the warring seas,
mist will not veil the Pass of Light for ever.
Although the leaves fall fallow-gold
through numberless years, shifting and drifting,
you shall see Valinor—you shall—
the far green country under the swift sunrise.
Together we, beneath the blue vaults of Varda,
will see stars tremble in the queenly song of her voice
—and I, I will refill the cup for you.
Chapter End Notes
This is an adaptation of Galadriel's well-known "Namarie" (the English version), with a few phrases borrowed from "Winter comes to Nargothrond" (in "The Lays of Beleriand" in HoME) and one phrase taken from Frodo's dream in the house of Tom Bombadil (LOTR).
(1) Comment by Ellynn for Finrod's Promise
Really nice!
Re: (1) Comment by Ellynn for Finrod's Promise
Thank you very much, Ellynn!
I really appreciate your reading and commenting when I know that you are so very busy just now!
(2) Comment by Elleth for Finrod's Promise
This gave me shivers. Beautifully done!
Re: (2) Comment by Elleth for Finrod's Promise
Thank you very much, Elleth!
I'm very glad it works for you.
(3) Comment by Erurainon for Finrod's Promise
You really get Finrod down. I think his hope is very much akin to Plato's forms in The Republic. Exilent job man.
Re: (3) Comment by Erurainon for Finrod's Promise
Thank you very much! I'm glad you think I got Finrod down.
I can see what you mean by the comparison with Plato's forms.
(4) Comment by Athrabeth for Finrod's Promise
I like how encouraging and solid this sounds! It definitely suits Finrod and is a nice counterpoint to Galadriel's.
Re: (4) Comment by Athrabeth for Finrod's Promise
Encouraging is definitely what it's meant to be!
I guess I think of that as one of Finrod's defining traits.
(5) Comment by Independence1776 for Finrod's Promise
This is lovely; I really like its hopefulness.
Re: (5) Comment by Independence1776 for Finrod's Promise
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
This was beautiful! And all…
This was beautiful!
And all the more emotional for having just watched the Lay of Leithian rock opera and hence being already full of Finrod feels
Thank you very much! I have…
Thank you very much!
I have only seen a snippet of that opera, from Finrod's song duel, but I can imagine!
Glad that those two impressions came together for you.
OOo. That is just wonderful…
OOo. That is just wonderful. Chilling. Even forbidden.
thank you very much!
Aw, what an excellent answer…
Aw, what an excellent answer to Galadriel's lament!
Thank you very much! I'm…
Thank you very much! I'm pleased that what I did there worked for you!