Oh Sweet Eru.

Your style is so incredibly descriptive but in an extremely poetic way. I am amazed at how you combine it! It's so complex I somtimes had real trouble understanding what you were writing about - but that's due to my lacks in English, not any of your fault.

Relation between Mairon and Melkor showed in your story is something I'd call my personal canon. It's horrible, it's terryfing, it's monstrous, depraved and wrong. But it's how I imagine it also. Perfect.

I will certainly wait for more though when I read it, my mind just screams in denial, screams to see any bit of love there.