Oh. My. Goodness. OK. You said this might be the beginning of a series. I am trying and failing to imagine how that might work. Anyway, so write it! Do it in English if you can manage that. I do have my list of words you might be suprised to find that Tolkien invented, but my Quenya grammar is non-existant. I'm babbling because you shocked me. I thought some of my writing of scenes like this was fairly explicit. Guess not! Anyway, I do find some interesting characterization here despite the label of PWP.

I am really sorry. I was looking forward to seeing where you were going with it!