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Wow, this is amazing! I love the incredibly vivid writing, and the emotion that's so clear. Poor Fingon...

"...phrased so awkwardly it seemed you had long ago forgotten their meaning and knew only that they represented something you yet craved, the promise of dark Mandos turned to blissful spring and sweet nectar in the fog of misery and ash-flavoured filth in which I found you"

I really loved that line. It shows Maedhros' situation/state of mind really well. Also the ending line was perfect.

Great story! :D