Oh, it is really nice to see a story featuring both Gildis and Hareth, and Hador's mother, too! Thank you very much!

I like your description of them going out to sit and spin in the autumn sunshine.

And the situation you create, with your thoughts about the choice of language and the tension it creates, is interesting!

How sad for Hareth that she miscarried. I'm glad it ends happily for her, and Gloredhel, too.

Hello again, 

I posted a link to the story to my Tumblr to draw the attention of Legendarium Ladies April to your prompt fill.

I hope that is okay, do say if not!

This is a really sweet scene.

It's nice to see a nice little slice of family life! And such lovely imagery of the autumn sunshine to set the scene.