I really love the idea of Nellas coming to Lorien after the fall of Doriath. I like her determination to find a place she can call a home, where she really wants to live. Beautiful story, greatly done! Thank you for sharing :)

<i>But she could not sleep easily when enclosed by walls; the streets and quays were thronged with people, and Nellas longed to slip away and escape their gaze. And the Sea itself -- flat and overwhelmingly vast, stretching into the distance like a barren plain without a single tree</i>

Beautifully expressed. I do love this entire story and find the interactions between characters have such an authentic feel to them. I didn't know I wanted to imagine these things happening. It is a wonderful denouement for me of the story of Nellas. Lovely work!