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<i>But she could not sleep easily when enclosed by walls; the streets and quays were thronged with people, and Nellas longed to slip away and escape their gaze. And the Sea itself -- flat and overwhelmingly vast, stretching into the distance like a barren plain without a single tree</i>

Beautifully expressed. I do love this entire story and find the interactions between characters have such an authentic feel to them. I didn't know I wanted to imagine these things happening. It is a wonderful denouement for me of the story of Nellas. Lovely work!