Shining by feanorusrex
Fanwork Notes
Thank you all so much for your responses to Burning. It really encouraged my to write more free verse.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Tilion's thoughts on Arien and being the moon spirit. Companion piece to Burning. Major Characters: Tilion Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 507 |
Posted on 28 October 2017 | Updated on 28 October 2017 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Chapter 1
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I.
Arien burns
I see her arcing across the sky.
Brilliant.
Flaming.
Morgoth is afraid of her.
So too would I be-
If she glanced me with all the power
of her fiery gaze,
if I saw her-
bearing the last light of Laurelin.
I would fear her
if she were not on our side.
Arien burns
Hot and angry
She will never forget the death of the Trees.
Her anger will never be extinguished.
Her hate for him will go on
until the ending of the world.
II.
I love Arien.
In the beginning
Arien and I lit the sky together,
but our lights proved too great.
And at Varda’s command
we were sundered.
Now.
We journey in a circle,
each following the other.
I am bound to this boat.
Yet sometimes,
I break my orbit.
I would reach her.
Her presence burns me
I would be ashes
if I stayed.
So I retreat.
She is too bright for me.
I am bound to be her other half.
the moon spirit,
night to her day.
I am content to follow,
together and apart
Following our arcs in the heavens
forever.
III.
My love,
she is heat
fire.
But I
am
cool and night and rest.
My light brings
peace.
I shine on the world,
gently
warding darkness away,
aiding sleep.
I do not burn away the stars,
when my boat draws near them.
They are my companions
always.
As I sail through the darkness.
And in front of me,
far away,
I see Arien’s inferno of light
drawing me on
forever more.
And I am
content.
(1) Comment by Lyra for Shining [Ch 1]
I'm so glad he's content in the end, that he sees the sense in being sundered from Arien and unable to be close to her for long. I felt rather sad for Tilion until the middle of the second verse, so it's good to see him realise the value in their differences and the peace and quiet his lonely journey through the night brings to the world. Less intense and more balanced than "Burning", but no less beautiful!
Re: (1) Comment by Lyra for Shining [Ch 1]
Thank you!!!
(2) Comment by feanorusrex for Shining [Ch 1]
Thank you!!