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I really like that Rog is so supportive and that Turgon and Idril are doing their best, as well.

It already looks, in this chapter I got to, as if it is going to lead to a better outcome for most of them. Crossing fingers...

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Rog understands what Maeglin has been through and how lonely it can be. He wants him to know that he is not alone. Turgon means well, but he never found a way to really connect with Maeglin after the disaster that was his arrival at Gondolin.

This fic got way out of hand during writing it but it started as a fix-it and I will fix this mess that is the end of the first age XD