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elennalore has requested the following types of constructive criticism on this fanwork: Characterization, Conflict, Description/Imagery, Mood/Tone, Plot. All constructive criticism must follow our diplomacy guidelines.


You did write about those three siblings again!

Except that Fingolfin is present in his absence, here.

How sad, and with that ominous twist at the end, too! But at least Lalwen agrees to come.

The description is very good and, as before, I like Finarfin's point of view.