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Ahh! How lovely to read of a friendship gradually developing into love. I appreciated your note that "new insights grow from any disagreement" - it's so true, when people don't devolve into a fight, and a mark of mature friendship!

I'm intrigued by your use of "treaty" as well as "treatise", as I thought the former only meant a formal agreement between states. Or small kids' Halloween goodies. ;)

Ahhhh dang it! I thought I had caught all of them!

I only learned that treaty and treatise were two different things about a paragraph from the end while writing this. They're all supposed to be treatises.

Gotta go fix it.

 

But thank you!

As an aromantic person, friendship developing into love is about the only way I understand romantic love could ever happen, so I like to write about my characters building their romance on strong platonic foundations.

I'm glad you like it too!