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I can so easily picture the changing countryside from your descriptions. I like details, such as noticing and enjoying the flowers while also collecting herbs... but not telling Galadriel what the fly agaric (I presume) is for. The way Celeborn dreams of sailing his swan ships again, and she's reminded of Lórien by the nightingales. The way the Sindar and Noldor become more comfortable in each others company is so true for a long trip. (If it doesn't go the other way!). I like the phrasing of "the House of Míriel and the House of Indis." Lovely little trip through Northern Beleriand, thank you!