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chrissystriped has requested the following types of constructive criticism on this fanwork: Spelling, Grammar, and Mechanics, Style. All constructive criticism must follow our diplomacy guidelines.

Thank you. My OCs just tend to take on lives of their own and who am I to deny them their own fic ;).

No, or at least I didn't have Mormirion in mind in mind. That one had a bit of a crush on Shai's mum and Mo is not interested in females. Like the orcs, I don't think all maiar of Melkor are evil. They joined him for a variety of reasons and not all enjoy cruelty (though they might not know it about each other. There's a lot of competitiveness going on.)