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I really appreciate these insights from Adar's pov and love your 'rehumanising' of the Uruks.

(I haven't seen this episode yet, but I think I'm rather going to appreciate this scene that much more when I get to it!)

Adar is my favorite character from the show and you explored his perspective so beautifully! I love how you show the conflict between his two identities, and what ultimately leads him to choose his alliegiance. You've managed to say so much in such a few words, I'd love to see more of your thoughts on Adar in future fics!