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I did not see that coming! What an original idea. The mouse POV reminded me the famous 'talking fox' in LotR. Fits right into the faerie realm. 

Really nice use of POV!

It wasn't all that misleading, really, as it made perfect sense in retrospect, but I was amused how I had allowed myself to  lured towards the wrong conclusion before that final reveal!

Glad the mouse was let go!

Thank you!!  I've never done something quite like this, it was very fun and I'm very glad it worked.

And no, Celegorm was not going to hurt the mouse.  I have been trying to find some sympathetic angle to his character and I've decided that he truly, deeply loves animals.  I mean, someone who bothered to learn all their languages must have been interested in more than just hunting them, so I've decided he just really *enjoys* the fact that he can talk to them!