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It's hard to be the sensitive one in a loud, boisterous family, even when you know they love you to pieces.  Love how you show them here.  It's very ...real.  Intimate.  I like seeing what we never see from Tolkien, and you're very good at writing these sort of moments of insight.

This was funny and sweet. :)

Aredhel and Celegorm really feel like infatuated teen cousins, doing everything to call one another's attention, but still keeping on the brink of something.

Loved how you worked the poem in. It's the sort of detail I adore.