All Manner of Beasts and Birds by sallysavestheday
Fanwork Notes
Written for the Bestiary of Arda Challenge, using the visual prompts of a bear, sea creatures, a flying eagle, a seated dog, a wolf, and a horse.
The sequence here is roughly chronological. Characters are oysters, Thorondor, Rochallor, Huan, Carcharoth, and the dancing bears of Numenor. Each is a perfect drabble of 100 words.
"Pearls there were before the Eldar thought or dreamed of any gem" is Tolkien (BoLT). All the rest is my own text.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Creatures of the Silmarillion: 6 perfect drabbles. Major Characters: Major Relationships: Genre: Challenges: Bestiary of Arda Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 617 |
Posted on 29 May 2023 | Updated on 29 May 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
All Manner of Beasts and Birds
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Oysters
Slow, sweet singers of the deep lands: they are Ossë’s children, sleeping in the sand. Shaped out of the ancient dark, bearded and wise, they dream their way through the long years in an elemental trance, humming. The pale lace of their mouths washes the current as they sing. Starlight dances down over their great beds, layer on layer; it weaves through the water-weed as the tides ebb and flow. They swallow secrets, wind them in nacre, hide them to be transformed. Beauty sleeps in humble, sheltered places. Pearls there were before the Eldar thought or dreamt of any gem.
*****
Eagle
Familiar of Manwë but not his slave, Thorondor keeps his own council, stakes his own claims. Fingolfin’s eldest has ever been kind to creatures of the wind -- as a child he carried bread, always, to feed great and small alike. From lark to hawk, the birds know and love him; they follow him, singing. All the way across the great plain and into the mountains he has been begging them for silence. The feathers on the shaft he aims in his misery gleam gold. He keens like any young thing might, so wounded at heart. Thorondor banks, circles. He stoops.
*****
Horse
They have known each other for so long that their bodies move as one, shifting weight and stride in perfect synchrony. From youth’s first shared apple to the last charge across the blackened wastes they have been bound: one great, free creature, running, leaping. The bright plains outside Tùna could not contain them; no more can the Anfauglith. Stones strike sparks at their passing; the beaten earth shivers and groans.
Afterward, limping home to Hithlum, Rochallor’s spirit slips its tether. He shivers, but Fingolfin’s warmth is gone. Half a heart is not enough to live on. Rochallor stumbles; he falls.
*****
Dog
What a misery, to have the power of speech, yet be so circumscribed! The bright blur that is his master would benefit from a wise dog’s conversation: words might settle his wild heart, cool his fevered blood. Their hunts would be enlivened: fine jests could be made of the quarry that got away, the awkward slither down a muddy riverbank, the burrs that cling to hair and coat. On a rainy night they might curl before the fire and share tales of the scuttling rabbits, the rich scents from the badger’s sett. But Huan must only whine, till Lùthien calls.
*****
Wolf
It burns; it burns: the bright stone, bitter and luminous, calling like a beacon to his black blood out of the creeping mists and the noisome smokes.
The Man holds it, foolishly outstretched. Too bright. It hurts; it must go out. The soft flesh separates delicately enough under his teeth, the crunch of bone is so slight as to be no matter. A great gulp, and the light is gone. But it is not: no, it sears him from within, all Song, its sharp edges slicing, wounding.
He runs, blindly, chasing the end of himself as he flees. Incandescent. Howling.
*****
Bears
It should be preposterous: the lumbering march of the bears, their great limbs stretching and turning as through honey, slow and sweet and sticky in the fading heat of autumn. Their eyes are solemn, gleaming gold; long claws furled into their softened paws. They move as to some piper’s wild song, in a grand promenade, its meaning clear to them but uncertain to the watching Men. None dare laugh – history and courtesy demand silence, even in delight. No wise man scorns the dancing bears, knowing the secret strength of their shaggy shoulders, the snapping power of their long white teeth.
Fauna, not flora
Really wonderful vignettes to read. You've captured the essence of all of these beings with so few words. ❤️
Saw this on AO3 and popped over to leave a comment here as well.
Thank you! I'm glad you…
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them.
Ooohhh man these were all…
Ooohhh man these were all fantastic! (Eagle just ... oof, straight to the heart! And Oyster, such a gorgeous description! Horse omg 😭 Bear was gorgeous!! Wolf captured the moment so perfectly!)
But Dog really got me thinking!! Huan was only gifted the ability of "human" (or rather, Elvish more like) speech three times. But Celegorm could speak dog! He spoke the language of all animals and birds! Now I am absolutely imagining that they had wild discourse on all manner of topics. I bet Huan made dog-jokes that Celegorm didn't understand 😂
Thank you! Eagle is my…
Thank you! Eagle is my personal favorite. I like a Thorondor who takes matters into his own talons (my anti-Valar tendencies are showing...). But yeah, you caught me on Huan. I could have written them having those conversations, but it's so much angstier this way. So assume for the purposes of this fic that "knowing the language of beasts" just means excellent veterinarian-level sensitivity to animal moods and behavior, not actual speech 😉.
Oh I'm sorry I absolutely…
Oh I'm sorry I absolutely did not mean it as a criticism or a 'gotcha' or anything. I loved that part and the way you approached it. It just got me thinking was all
Oh, I didn't take it as a…
Oh, I didn't take it as a gotcha! Just an interpretive choice. I'm glad you enjoyed these, and that they got you thinking. Now I kind of want to write the other version. Imagine Huan's continuum of playfulness to exasperation to puzzlement to disgust to despair! Lecturing away like another dad and being roundly dismissed. Woof!
What a lovely mix, and very…
What a lovely mix, and very in keeping with the Bestiary theme! (And the oysters feels timely - I just had a conversation with bunn about them yesterday.)
Thank you! Oysters seem to…
Thank you! Oysters seem to be everywhere, with this challenge. A lovely common theme.
Wonderful drabbles! Varied…
Wonderful drabbles! Varied and beautiful descriptions and such emotional charge in each of them!
Thank you! I'm glad you…
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them. 🙂
I loved these snapshots!
I loved these snapshots!
Thanks very much!
Thanks very much!
Very fine
I love how each stands beautifully compact and complete to itself, and together the progression builds a kind of impressionistic view of the Silmarillion as a whole, with the Bears as a lovely epilogue.
Thanks very much! I enjoyed…
Thanks very much! I enjoyed crafting something a little more structured and formal than my usual ficlets. I'm glad to hear that the individual pieces and the progression worked for you.
I love all of these!
I love all of these!
Thank you! 🙂
Thank you! 🙂