Being a lord of Gondolin was fairly fatal.

Oof.  I mean honestly just being Noldo wasn't much better.

“I don’t remember our father at all,” Elros muttered.

🥺

Something of our family , he meant.

Imagine how Elrond felt about that eons later when the Dwarves show up with just that!!  I wonder if he thought back to this  moment and was glad they had been recovered at all.

Elros noted that he’d managed to convey appropriate respect for princes along with sarcasm so cutting he was tempted to ask to borrow the man’s whetstone.

😂

This was such a lovely story!! <3

Very well done! (Pelendur has his work cut out for him, rather :-).) The image of the alley of roses is really amazing. 

I hope Elrond was able to help the person who touched that crown. And I noticed how Glamdring was conspicuous in its absence. Headcanon accepted.

I enjoyed the brother's spirits, in the midst of all that, but also appreciated the more serious and darker themes running through.

Very well written and I could really visualize the setting.

And I am fond of your OC Pelendur!