it would be nice if I could have more time to talk to her and figure it out without busybody relatives hovering over my shoulder.

Uuuugggh, I feel this one!  

wishing for no more visitors that evening

Perhaps just one more visitor... ;)

This was so sweet!  I love uncertain, awkward, or slow-blossoming loves than at-first-sights where nobody has to learn or grow. <3

This is so sweet!! I love Maglor lightly teasing Fingon and the hopefulness in the atmosphere.

I like what you did with the lamps; that is a lovely bit at the end!

Nosy Maglor is a bit of a pest, but he turns out to be more supportive than he seems at first.

I really enjoyed this relaxed and (comparatively) unworried moment, irritating as Maglor seems to be, especially as he's really just curious and wishes his cousin well. Dire as things become later in Beleriand, it's really nice to think of lightheaded moments, and as much as they tease each other, they really do care for one another. 

A lovely use of the prompts.

ETA I meant "lighthearted", but I guess they're both a bit lightheaded, in different ways!