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Aww, this is so sweet!

Though it does seem both Elladan and Celebrían are at their limit - if they hadn't been riding out at the end, someone would have snapped. (Or both?)

Poor Elladan, having to wait at home when he really wanted to ride with Elrond. And poor Celebrían just as frayed and worried as he is, but having to still be mom (and lady of the valley besides). Though she does seem to miss that Erestor would likely include her in that fierce loyalty to Elrond and his sons if she would let him...

Thank you!! Merry Christmas!

Yay!  A new addition to my very favorite Tolkien fanfic tale!  Thank you so much!

I'm so thrilled you have Celebrían being a builder; my Galadriel is the same way (she learned it from her father), so clearly it's in the genes.  And there's no better way to work through your existential angst than by building something new.