Luthien Tinuviel by ford_of_bruinen
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Fanwork Notes
Written for the Around The Fire challange. Prompt:
- I'd like a story about Thingol, but not that maniac who ended up under a dwarf's axe, only a happy man, king, husband or father -- your pick. Thank you :)
Fanwork Information
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Summary: Thingol bonds with his newborn daughter Major Characters: Elu Thingol Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Around the Fire Rating: General Warnings: |
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| Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 85 |
| Posted on 5 October 2016 | Updated on 5 October 2016 |
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This fanwork is complete. | |
Luthien Tinuviel
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Darker than starfall,
Soft as a kittens fur,
Such wonder your hair is my little,
Jewel of my heart
Eyes lit by starlight,
Bottomless and deep,
Know that one day men will drown in them
As I am drowning now.
I can see years passing,
Centuries flying by,
As you learn to dance among the trees
On quick as lightning feet.
What will time bring you
Endless joy, deepest grief?
Whatever come this forest will guard you.
You are my heart and here you’ll remain.
(1) Comment by Robinka for Luthien Tinuviel
A beautiful voice of a loving father, for whom his newborn daughter was the most wonderful being in the world. A touch of foreshadowing and lovely metaphors. Very, very poignant little thing, and I'm really happy that my prompt inspired you. Thank you!
Re: (1) Comment by Robinka for Luthien Tinuviel
I am glad you liked it, i think that moment of any parent firt meeting their child i just so full of hope and love and fears all at once. Tried to capture that a bit glad you iked the metaphors and you now me, i cant resist foreshadowing! thanks for the review xx