Eyes Like the Sea by oshun
Fanwork Notes
. . . and his sleep was troubled with many dreams, of which naught remained in waking memory save one: a vision of an isle, and in the midst of it was a steep mountain, and behind it the sun went down, and shadows sprang into the sky; but above it there shone a single dazzling star. –Unfinished Tales, “Of Tuor and His Coming to Gondolin.”
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Summary:
Major Relationships: Genre: Romance Challenges: Gift of a Story Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 820 |
Posted on 7 January 2017 | Updated on 7 January 2017 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Tuor Comes to Gondolin
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Idril found it nearly impossible to take her eyes off Tuor. She mused to herself that he looked better without the untidy beard, although her reaction embarrassed her. It was probably a reflexive narrow preference for the familiar on her part. Or maybe her response was culturally conditioned, not particularly admirable in either case. She did not have to be told explicitly that, as fond as her father had been of Tuor’s father and uncle, that he would be unlikely to be pleased if he learned she found this mortal appealing on a romantic level. On the other hand, there was probably no one in Gondolin good enough for King Turgon’s only daughter.
Tuor might have arrived out of the wilderness with the outward appearance of a scruffy outlaw but his eyes revealed a strong and noble nature, despite his history of torment. Suffering can refine or coarsen one depending upon the resources within a given person. She sensed that Tuor had not been damaged by his early losses or his later thralldom, but that through his will and endurance in his darkest days he had banked the flames of hope within his own heart. Most importantly, he carried a message from a Vala and none other than the Lord of Waters, the King of Sea, her father’s own protective spirit among the Mighty Ones. What better credentials might one offer than that?
She smiled and shook her head, still gazing at Tuor across the room in a small circle which included Voronwë and a group of young Elves, most of them of the Falathrim, who had given up the seafaring life to follow Turgon from Nevrast into Gondolin. Their high-spirited conversation sprinkled with enthusiastic gesticulation and laughter, drew tolerant attention to them.
Yet Tuor glanced up and looked in her direction, as though he sensed she was watching him. He cocked his head to one side. A pellucid smile brightened his handsome face. Bowing with self-possession to his new-found comrades, he excused himself and began to wend his way unhurriedly across the chamber crowded with courtiers and warriors, administrators and wealthier tradesmen, and lords and ladies of the noble houses, the usual attendees at any function like this in Gondolin.
When Elemmakil, a captain of rigid discipline but an individual strong in wisdom, had allowed Voronwë and this man of the House of Hador into the city, the refugees had looked bedraggled, half-starving, and near collapse. Their arrival caused a stir.
Idril had found Tuor striking at first sight despite the raggedy smattering of hair on the young man’s cheeks and other evidence of hard living. In her opinion, Tuor ranked in physical appeal among the most handsome specimens of the Elven or Edain—a tall strong body, beautifully wrought, a fair face and a high brow and eyes like the sea in their color, their depth, and mutability. In any case, and more importantly, she sensed in him a valorous heart and a mighty purpose.
He grinned at her and she smiled back. Although perhaps the quiet type, he was far from shy. His eyes sparkled with challenge and invitation.
“Good evening, my lord Tuor son of Huor. Did you rest well?” she asked. “I hope you have found your accommodations comfortable.” He looked clean, warm, dry, and adequately, if not elegantly, clothed. The pale blue tunic and jerkin with darker leggings suited him well, accentuating the color of his sea-blue eyes.
“Is there anything else that you need? Do you have a good bed? Enough blankets?”
“I have been given a fresh, overstuffed feather bed and copious blankets, which is a spectacular improvement over the cold hard ground.” She thought she detected a hint of lasciviousness in his charming smirk. Well, that would be normal in a healthy young man, suddenly provided with good food and plenty to drink, new clothes and warm baths, and the solicitous attention of a not unattractive woman. “You live in luxury here, Princess,” he teased.
“As I am well aware you know, young sir. I’ve experienced hardship in my life.”
He looked abashed, blushing sweetly. “My apologies, kind lady. You look so young that it’s difficult to remember that I am not your equal in age. It’s hard to believe you experienced a life filled with sorrow and danger long before you came to this sheltered city.”
“But still I am considered young amongst my own folk here. I insist we consider ourselves to be equals.” She was playing with fire and knew it. Instead of fearing a conflagration, she only welcomed the warmth, leaning further into his space. “I hope we will become the greatest of friends,” she whispered. His face shone in the lamplight, clear and beautiful as a young hero graven in stone. She inwardly laughed at her foolishness but smiled up into his eyes, while marveling to herself, so this is what falling in love feels like?
(1) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Awww, this was so lovely and sweet! I like your Idril. She knows what she wants and is not going to stand by and wait to be wooed. And her rebuke to Tuor reminds us as well how much she deserves this happiness.
And your Tuor is very, very cute. (Although I personally have a penchant for men with beards! :D)
Re: (1) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Awww thanks!
And your Tuor is very, very cute. (Although I personally have a penchant for men with beards! :D)
Somehow, I got it into my head that I had a reference that Tuor shaved. I might have just imagined that or extrapolated from the Numenoreans having scanty beards or none canon. Please do not tell me that is fanon! I will be embarrassed. Personally, I am not a great fan of beards (Bobby has a nice beard, however--but he is exceptionally good-looking also). I am glad you did not reject my version of Tuor because of the beard question.
Tuor, the cute guy raised by Elves, gets even better as he grows older in Gondolin, becoming "mighty in stature and in mind" (The Silm.). You will have to excuse me, I am very silly this morning.
Thanks for noticing that I just keep cranking out those bios (it's a pleasure, in general!). Speaking of this particular storyline. I seem to recall you wanted to write a bio of Voronwe? I really adore his role in this story and can see him being an awesome candidate for a bio by you.
(2) Comment by Lotrfan for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
I don't often find Idril fics--there don't seem to be too many.
this was lovely. I like how observant yet self-aware she is. She seems very confident and comfortable with herself.
Tuor sounds adorable from your description.
I'd love to see the follow up to this, as their relationship progresses.
(3) Comment by IgnobleBard for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
I always like your characters and Idril comes off as so real and sweet in this. How could she help but notice the handsome, heroic Tuor. I especially like the bit about his raggedy whiskers. :-) But of course the best part is how their shared tragic pasts make them able to bond and find happiness at last with each other.
Re: (3) Comment by IgnobleBard for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Thanks, sweetie, for commenting! I really appreciate you reading it so late at night. You are very generous with me. I think they make a great couple and I enjoy that, although not without a lot of pain and suffering, they more or less get a happy ending! Yay! Thanks again.
(4) Comment by Himring for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Just copying my comment across from AO3:
Oh, this is nice, just the fic to give one a warm and fuzzy feeling on a grey morning, Oshun!
I like that glimpse of Tuor surrounded by Voronwe and his Falathrim friends.
And I like how she reminds him that she has known hardship herself and wasn't always the princess surrounded by luxury.
"I insist we consider ourselves to be equals" - what a generous and sweet thing to say.
And what a lovely ending!
Thank you very much for writing this for me!
Re: (4) Comment by Himring for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Thanks again, Himring, for providing me the opportunity. I am so happy that you liked it!
(5) Comment by mor2904 for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
As I said at AO3, I loved this fic.
It's that awkward/sweet moment when you realize you probably are falling in love with somebody...
And your Tuor sounds gorgeous-no wonder Idril is attracted to him.
Re: (5) Comment by mor2904 for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
Thank you so much for commenting here (I like to think of this as my home base~). I would like to write a longer story about them someday. Thanks so much for reading.
(6) Comment by hennethgalad for Eyes Like the Sea [Ch 1]
nice. (there are two 'that' s in the third sentence...)
i like the contrast between 'valorous heart and mighty purpose' and 'he grinned' heheheh