Poor Feanor, he doesn't understand his wife at all. It must have really been hard for them to split over the Silmarils. I think you did a great job of showing how much of herself she put into the children, but then he got them in the separation so he did okay in the end.

I like your descriptions of how detailed her artwork was, just like in the quote, and how her motherhood is told from Feanor's pov. I enjoyed this a lot.