Congratulations on completing this series! That was a real challenge of challenges!

I think you brought it to a very satisfactory conclusion here, with Maglor not only integrated in the celebrations but also entrusted with vital concerns. 

This is such a great conclusion to the series! I love the image of Bilbo taking over the kitchen for some proper hobbit food. And I also really like that after such a rocky start with Gandalf, it's implied that Maglor's going to be the one to pick him up out in the wild and bring him back to Rivendell.

AND it's everyone who trusts Maglor now to participate in something of this magnitude! "WE trust you" says Elrond, not merely "I" and I love that so much.