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Oohh, this is definitely an eerie take on the Halls of Mandos!

I like the way you use the formatting (the way it's not broken up into separate paragraphs) to visually add to Feanor's confusion and show how jumbled his thoughts were. The sort of stream of consciousness style is also interesting!

Great story!