Endless… by Yirth-kaio

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Fanwork Notes

Written for B2MEM 2010, challenge "Have you ever felt totally lost? In a big city? In a foreign country? Because somebody has left you alone? Write a story, poem or create an artwork where the character has to deal with loss--either physical or spiritual."

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Feanor's soul is lost in the Halls of Mandos and in its own faded memories.

Major Characters: Fëanor

Major Relationships:

Genre: Experimental

Challenges:

Rating: General

Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 539
Posted on 27 May 2010 Updated on 27 May 2010

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Comments on Endless…

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Oohh, this is definitely an eerie take on the Halls of Mandos!

I like the way you use the formatting (the way it's not broken up into separate paragraphs) to visually add to Feanor's confusion and show how jumbled his thoughts were. The sort of stream of consciousness style is also interesting!

Great story!