I really enjoyed this fic, and was sad to see no one left a review. I liked the question of whether evil is a pit with a ground or is bottomless--and I like how the Feanorians can't answer that. The reason for Maglor giving Elros and Elrond new names also intruiged me and made that random fact make a  lot of sense.

Maglor was great in this piece. He was believably both the sensitive musician and yet a ruthless Feanorian. When he killed one of his men just because he wans't being truthful... wow. I wasn't expecting that, but it worked for Maglor. The reader, like that guard, forgot that Maglor is a Feanorian, a kinslayer, and he doesn't need to think twice about using violence. Yet, it haunts him afterwards, and that's why he wants to find Elwing's sons. Or he thinks he wants to--that was another one of my favorite moments. I think it was insightful pyschology that realize that Maglor didn't really want to find them and deal with the consequences, he just wanted to assuage his guilt a little.

So, I apologize that my review is a little jumbled and not well-written. I just thought this fic deserved some response!