A moving portrayal of the King and his courage!

At one point it gets a bit hard to follow if one hasn't read "Into Darkness Fell". I'd suggest moving the reference to that story from the End Notes into the Chapter Notes so readers are aware of the complementary narrative beforehand and also inserting a gap (or three stars or the like) before the sentence starting  "After the parley" so that it becomes clearer that you are skipping the parley and going straight to the battle.

(Also very minor nitpick: typo in "Fegalund's")