Obsidian to Cut by LadyBrooke

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Summary:

He is reborn in Valinor, and they assume he died because the Kindi were incapable of standing against Morgoth, especially after their King and Princes were not.

(The Noldor forget that their relatives weren't left behind on the March because they were incapable, but because they didn't wish to come.)

Major Characters: Original Male Character(s)

Major Relationships:

Genre: Drama, Experimental

Challenges: Revolution

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 333
Posted on 10 March 2017 Updated on 10 March 2017

This fanwork is complete.

Chapter 1

So my prompt was the Battle of Adwa tapestry. This was originally going to be an epic story of a battle between the Kindi (one group of the Avari) and a bunch of orcs that thought they were going to have an easy time with these elves compared to the other bunch, and how they were proven very wrong, kind of like how most of Italy thought it'd be easy to beat those Ethiopians.

And then it drifted into a reborn member of the Kindi in Valinor, dealing with prejudiced Noldor.

So it's very loosely inspired, but it is inspired.

Read Chapter 1

He is reborn in Valinor, centuries after he passes from Middle-earth

 

(Centuries that he spends in the Halls, ignored by his son and his son’s children and grandchildren, if his son even realized he was there to begin with and had told them who he was. His daughter refuses to acknowledge her brother when she joins him.)

(Their family tension did not begin with his grandsons).

 

He is reborn, and he does not bother to greet the King of the Noldor, who the Valar tried to tell him would be his King.

 

(Ingwë recognizes him when he passes the area the Kindi have claimed for themselves, ignored by their relatives. Ingwë brings him news of his old friends, and promises to tell Olwë that his mother is in the Halls now. )

(Perhaps he will forgive Ingwë for letting his people view them wrongly. Perhaps.)

 

He keeps his weapons sharp, even though the Valar said that they are unnecessary for the reborn.

 

(They try to keep him from anything he could use to make weapons, but Aulë keeps obsidian for use in decorations. It is little matter to ask for some for his own use, and if they think that weapons can only be made of steel and iron, that is their own failing.)

 

He is reborn in a land that is not his own, that he never wanted and that his son had forsaken him for.

 

(And he hears what they say about his people, that they were overrun by the Dark Lord’s forces, that they could not have fought him with primitive weapons.

But the Noldor never stop and wonder why they were able to flee to lands closer to the East when the  Valar tore their  lands apart, without more destruction caused by his forces there.

Steel may be less brittle, but obsidian is sharp enough to kill whatever the enemy brings forth, no matter what the Noldor think of black weapons.)  


Chapter End Notes

Yes, OC is totally Finwë's father, who may or may not exist in canon.

Finwë is not aware of his sister, by the way. She was born after he left. She does not care about this fact, or that he's a king, or anything else, because he upset their parents for a couple shiny trees and the freedom to ignore what was going on in Middle-earth (at least that's what she thinks). 

The only younger generation member aware of exactly what his ancestor's have been doing this whole time (aka being awesome at fighting Morgoth, stereotypes and expectations be damned) is Maglor, who totally stumbles into a clearing in the East and finds elves that look rather like some parts of his family. And is then quickly forced out of moping away the Third Age, by a woman who claims to be his great-grandmother and tells him that "It's good and all to be regretful, but perhaps if he'd quit that for a moment, he could do something to try and redeem himself, like helping rid the world of Morgoth's troublesome mini-me."


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Oooh, fascinating. And very sad - both to imagine the Avari ending up in Valinor after all, possibly still quite against their will, and to think that Finwë's father and the rest of the family never get over the rift caused by the Great Journey. Interesting (and moving) that Ingwë is less obstinate! Smart move to use the "decorative" obsidian to make blades, whatever the Valar say. You never know when you need one...

And I absolutely adore the idea that Maglor would have run into that side of the family at some point.

Thank you! I've always felt bad for the Avari (and the Sindar & Nandor) that there doesn't seem to be an option for those who die other than remain in the Halls or be reborn in a land that isn't theirs, with a bunch of elves already there that they don't seem to get along with very well. I do think Finwë's father eventually gets introduced to the rest of his family and they get over it. It just takes a long time.

My Ingwë is always one of my least obstinate characters! Probably because if he wasn't, my only characters in Valinor would be very stubborn Noldor and very stubborn Teleri, and somebody has to break up the fights and not react on pure emotion (plus, his whole family came, so he can take a step back and not immediately think of a fight with his father or brother).

Fëanor had to get his habit of sneakily making blades from somewhere. :P

I'm glad you like the idea of Maglor running into that side of his family! I worried it'd be too out there, which is why this story isn't about that - but I just love the idea of him stumbling across them, figuring out their language, and then slowly putting together the pieces about the son that left them and went to Valinor while they've been hearing stories from the Western shores of cursed elves that came back across the sea. At least he wouldn't be completely without family, even if it is new family...

 

Thank you! I was inspired by the line about how the Avari thought the Noldor were arrogant, and it seems to me that it probably went both ways in terms of judging each other, along with a love of anthropology and how no different culture is as stupid as the dominant culture thinks they are.

Brooke, this is wonderful! So much going on in relatively few words, and I love the parenthetical asides and what they show of what is going on in your OC's mind.

This story raises so many good questions. What of the Avari who died? What was done (or not) to accommodate them in Valinor? And having forsaken the Great Journey, what did they think of awaking in a land they made a choice not to inhabit?

Of course, the historical bias researcher in me loves that you are showing the perspective of one of the groups conveniently ignored (or actively maligned) by the Silm and the HoMe materials. I've always had a soft spot for the Avari, feeling like they were mistreated in the texts writing about them (never BY them--of course). Yet anger and pity for your OC and what he faces in his new home is undercut by the distinct feeling that he's able to care for himself and may help dispove some mistaken beliefs about his people ...

Thank you, Dawn! I'm glad the parenthetical asides work in the way I wanted to.

All of those questions are things that my Sindar, Silvan, and Avari would be more than glad to answer, mostly in terms of how little they think about the Valar and Noldor's plans for them in Valinor after rebirth.

I think the perspectives of the groups ignored/maligned by the Silm and HoMe are some of the most interesting for me to write, because if I wanted a Gondolin-view point biased story of them, well, there's the Silm or hundreds of fanfics and forum posts to read. He can take care of himself, for the most point - and since I borrowed his feelings about parts of the situation from my own experiences (mainly the idea that one's birth and where one is from makes the difference between being capable and being an idiot), he cares more about making people understand than gaining pity

I have the feeling he overwhelms the Noldor with arguments and screeds against their biased ideas. Finarfin probably starts wishing for Fëanor to be reborn just so somebody that can keep up with all of the arguments is around. :P