Comments

The Silmarillion Writers' Guild is more than just an archive--we are a community! If you enjoy a fanwork or enjoy a creator's work, please consider letting them know in a comment.


I enjoyed this story very much. It's great how much agency you have given Linn/Galwen in spite of the limitations under which she has to operate. Her choice of a new name rings very true, and I love that she focusses on the lucky aspects of her story rather than the losses! Her determination to fulfill her debt, even if nobody properly understands it, and to build herself a new life and assert her boundaries are admirable and make her shine. I also really liked the way you wrote the twins - they show some real compassion and wisdom in the way they deal with Galwen's situation!