Day Will Come Again by Narya
Fanwork Notes
Written for the SWG's New Year's Resolution challenge. This is the fic I meant to write for the Season's Greetings challenge last year, but somehow I never quite got round to it.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Fingon takes a moment to remember his cousin at midwinter. Major Characters: Fingon Major Relationships: Genre: General Challenges: New Year's Resolution, Season's Greetings Rating: General Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 203 |
Posted on 19 January 2020 | Updated on 19 January 2020 |
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Chapter 1
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Furred grey clouds gathered over Barad Eithel. The dying sun tinged their folds flesh-pink. Stony air hung stale in the plains, and Sirion whispered over frozen rocks.
Fingon cradled a goblet of fortified wine. A good vintage – rich; silky; almost sweet. A favourite of Celegorm's. Carefully he reached for his cousin's mind, and was rebuffed with a swipe and a snarl like a wounded bear.
Leave us, cousin. Curufin, his voice as sharp as winter's teeth in Fingon's mind. We have no need of your pity.
As you wish. But Fingon ached for them both, for everything they had been, for all that they had shared – and for their golden kinsman who had died in the dark.
The fire pulled low as though taking a breath. The day was over; the clouds' soft underbellies glowed with the red of blood and old wine. Fingon stared into the gloom of the longest night, remembering waves of yellow hair, eyes wise and still beyond their years, a smile that put Laurelin to shame. Grief tightened like a whip around his chest. We will meet again, dear one. He rose, and arranged his face into the kingly mask he could not quite grow used to. I believe that even now.
(1) Comment by Lferion for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
Oh, this is so effective, and a moment I've not read about before. I particularly like that Fingon has connections to most if not all his cousins.
Re: (1) Comment by Lferion for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
Thank you! I really lobe Fingon, and I think he would care about all his cousins, even now when it's all going wrong.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really love Fingon, and I think he would care about all his cousins, even now when it's all going wrong.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really love Fingon, and I think he would care about all his cousins, even now when it's all going wrong.
(2) Comment by Lferion for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
This is very speaking. The whip-lash of grief is particularly effective, and th foreshadowing of it adds to the weight. Well done indeed.
Re: (2) Comment by Lferion for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
Thank you :)
(3) Comment by Himring for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
This is a very telling moment.
Those brief glimpses of Celegorm and Curufin's feelings at the time--and Fingon's grief, but still without giving up on anyone or losing hope, entirely.
Re: (3) Comment by Himring for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
Thank you, Himring. I very much imagine Fingon as being the cousin who wouldn't give up on anyone.
(4) Comment by oshun for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
I really like this interpretation of Fingon. Not easily rebuffed!
Re: (4) Comment by oshun for Day Will Come Again [Ch 1]
I do imagine Fingon as very forgiving, and something of a mediator who had a good relationship with all his cousins. It makes me so sad to think of them all at this point :(
Oh, ouch. Poor Fingon seems…
Oh, ouch. Poor Fingon seems to be grieving the disintegration of his family as much as Finrod's death.
I think that's probably…
I think that's probably quite correct :(
Such a great scene, and it…
Such a great scene, and it is so emotional too. Love it!