I really love the idea that Elrond communicates with his mother - at least this once - via winged messenger. It makes so much sense that I'm surprised I don't see it explored more often, now that you've brought it up!

I also enjoyed the twins' banter - and your kind and practical Círdan. And it's such a lovely thought that Ulmo, Ossë and Uínen are keeping an eye out for Maglor!

But Himling Isle still stood, and it occurred to him to wonder at that—that the fortress of Maedhros son of Fëanor would remain as a monument and testament to Beleriand after other arguably greater places had drowned, when even the grave of Beren and Lúthien lay now far beneath the waves.

What a brilliant observation! Of course, it might simply be due to topography, but still... it's a really interesting detail!

Thank you for writing and sharing!