Oh, the poppy image is intense! Nice work!

Such a contrast between Melian's grief and Luthien and Beren's joyous departure!

I look forward to seeing where you will take this next.

I like the contrast between Elwing and Tindomiel, too.

Again, what a contrast!

A good series!

Wow, it appears I missed a few chapters on DW - I caught Melian and Tindomiel and nothing in between over there. (Probably my own fault - things have been hectic lately.) I'm enjoying seeing the varying attitudes the women have to death.

I think I liked Tindómiel's passing best, and of course Beren and Luthien going to their future hand in hand (and the image of Finrod, oh that was perfect!) I love Elwing and how you wrote her feels right, and my heart ached for Arwen as it always has. Her father was right, it was a bitter reckoning, I think. 

I'm so glad I spotted these in my SWG feed. 

Such a sad end, for Arwen!

She found it bitter, at the end, as Elrond had feared.