Middle-earth Poetry (Silmarillion version) by Zdenka

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The Unfinished Poem

Taken from her house in order to wed the King, Inzilbêth tries to express her feelings in poetry to the woman she loves. (Sapphic verse. Also a true drabble, as counted by MS Word.)


Oh my love, my thoughts are in such disorder,
just like ants, their colony broken open,
when the small black bodies run frantic, seeking
hither and thither.

Gimilzôr the King--he would have me wed him.
This must be a bitter charade of marriage;
how can there be gladness between us when my
heart is unwilling?

From the King come jewels I take no joy in;
but to you, since fate did not wish us happy,
one last gift, this necklace of golden amber,
ere I must leave you.

Only moments left--and the poem I started
still is unfinished--


Chapter End Notes

Written for the Silmarillion Writers' Guild/Silmladylove Tolkien Femslash Week Bingo, for the prompts:

Formats and Genres: Sapphic Stanza (O43)
Four Words: charade, amber, colony, moment (I12)
Opposites Attract: star-crossed lovers (O43)

The Akallabêth in the Silmarillion tells how Ar-Gimilzôr was a king of Númenor who scorned the Valar, and hated and distrusted the Elf-friends. Inzilbêth, who was "renowned for her beauty," was kin to the Lords of Andúnië and secretly one of the Faithful. Ar-Gimilzôr married her against her will, and "No love was there between Ar-Gimilzôr and his queen."


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