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Chapter 84
He can speak no more, his lungs burning as if a flame is caught inside him and his charred skin starts to smolder. Fëanor knows this is the end. The last thing he sees before his eyes close forever is Nelyo's hair. He reaches out one finger to brush it and whispers "Nerdanel," with his last breath.
This was originally intended as the last chapter of Spirit of Fire. I wasn't expecting it to be this long when I started it. I was recently reading though it again in preparation for posting it to another site and I realized I wasn't quite finished with it. So i added an Epilogue-a bit of closure as well as impetus to perhaps tell the story that follows.
Thank you for joining me on my exploration of Fëanor. I've grown to care for him quite a bit more then I did before writing this. I've got thoughts and ideas about his time in Mandos and his possible rebirth. But I think I will leave that for another story. . .
Again many thanks to the lovely nyx thranduillon, finfinfin1 and ziggy3 for all their encouragement and feedback on this and thanks to all who read and/or commented on it!