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I really enjoyed your story. Definitely in the same vein as Fire to Sate the Appetite! I liked how you wove Sauron's displeasure and frustration into it. You know he had to be seething that his master was taking such pleasure from someone other than himself. At least he got to be somewhat involved! Great job. Thank you for sharing.