Wow, this was a lot more serious than I expected from the summary. In a good way. I mean, cheeky teenagers sneaking out at night and needing to be protected by their less cheeky siblings are also a great read, but this discussion was certainly more important. I love the undertones of their different destinies - their different reactions to strong drink, Elros deciding that he doesn't have all of eternity - and his final request really packs a punch. He's already made his decision, or is at least guessing at it, it seems!

Wow!  Both comedy and tragedy!  Few stories can successfully combine them.  This one does; so true-to-life.

I especially like the "Elros rolled his eyes--" sentence (which I cant' insert here, because I don't know how it's done) but I love the snark.  

These two are some of my favorite characters.

Very good interaction between those two!

Very telling, about the different issues with their two fathers.

And that ending is very strong, that final sentence, throat-gripping.