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Simultaneously horrific and glorious.  I hardly know what I can compare it with to give you an idea of how riveting this chapter is, even compared with the rest of its riveting yéni únótimë setting in the House of Elrond.  Maybe Guy Gabriel Kay's The Sarantine Mosaic series?

I don't comment much on your works because it's so embarrassing never to be able to come up with something more eloquent than "I hecking love this!"  But I do really love it.

Thank you so much for your kind words! Writing this chapter was a huge challenge and I'm very proud of finishing it.

I'm also very happy that you liked the setting. JRRT left us such a wealth of material and much of it is rarely used by fanfic writers. I'm aiming to explore the entire course of the third and early fourth age in this 'verse. That's a big project, and getting feedback like yours really helps to keep me going.

I hope you'll feel more comfortable commenting on my stories in the future, even if it's just to say 'I liked this" (or not!). 

Thanks again! 

This whole story is absolutely stunning! I am in awe of your gift of description and I love the fact that you are filling in the gaps in history so well. Your original characters are brilliant too. I felt so sorry for that poor little orc snaga.

The double battle chapter had me on the edge of my seat!

Sorry for not commenting on each chapter but I've only just managed to log in on my phone!