I love the idea of the library of Cîr Imladris and this is an especially fascinating document and commentary! I appreciate both the uncertainty about the provenance and the archivist's precise observations (until right before the end, that is, when he gets deliberately vague).

[I do hope you don't mind my mentioning it, but you have somehow ended up with one instance of "here" for "hear"]

Your continuing research into the contents of this archive is leading to some fascinating results! 

I'm glad the archivist found the original! I agree guest right is an important topic.

"small salt-water stains"

*weeps quietly*

I like this a lot! Terrific commentary by the archivist.

"The hand is clear, precise and elegant — a copybook example of Pre-Darkening Tengwar."

Love this. 

Oh! This is wonderful. But you are kicking in an open door with me. I love Fuingon and Maedhros so much. Love Fingon's warmth, heart, courage, and noble aspirations so much in this. So tragic and beautiful.

This series is so inventive!

I am fascinated by these documents and annotations.

I'm fascinated - is this scrap meant to be written by Elendil, Elrond, or someone else entirely? (I apparently missed this at the time.)

Ooooh what a fantastic premise!  I will absolutely be back to read all of these!

I love this whole concept so much. The details of the works are so well thought out, and the archival processes (and hiccups) so detailed. The personalities come through so clearly. And there's pathos, and humor, and curiosity. Delightful, every time. 

this is structured in such a original and clever way! I love it! I will definitetly read also the other chapters! Beautiful!

I really love how you construct these - so many little delightful details, like the Dwarf-made paper and oak-gall ink.  It really does read (to my layman's eyes) very much like someone describing an ancient text!

An arrow loosed from bowstring twined of hair & shadows plied

Man I love this line!

Really clever!  What a complex tradition you have imagined here.

And I love all the archival detail.

It's an interesting and cool idea, to write something for a fragmentary idea in the form of fragmentary manuscript pages! I like your explanations for the various confusions. And I'd be fascinated to read the "Beren Strongbow and the Princess of Night" version(s)!

Oh my hat!! How utterly sublime!

Your poem is so evocative, the visual presentation as a forest by a lake just gets me so excited, and then to top it off all the little archivist details are simply marvellous!

See the eldritch sheen
Seeping
Neath the carven crown

Wow!!  The poem itself but that art and presentation is next level!  And I love the commentary on it, guessing the age based on little clues and questioning translations... <3