Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pain Knowledge) by Lferion
Fanwork Notes
Written for the July 2020 Silmarillion Writer's Guild challenge "A True Leader" where the prompts were quotes from Women Leaders. My quote was "Pain is the Root of Knowledge" -- Simone Veil.
Posted here on AO3.
Many thanks to Runa and Morgynleri for encouragement and feedback.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Roots, knowledge, and pain, a tangle of possibility Major Characters: Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: True Leader Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 126 |
Posted on 1 August 2020 | Updated on 1 August 2020 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pain Knowledge)
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If pain is the root of knowledge,
What is the root of pain?
What ground do those roots grow in
What waters those leaves like rain?
Too simple to blame the Marring
To Melkor give all fault
When Making itself is effort
Mere effort no reason to halt
Oh growing is change and struggle
And that which lives must grow
Or fail and fall to shadow
And start again up from the blow
More than one root had the treelight
Whose seeds are many and one
Their death wrought grief and darkness
But now shine the Moon and the Sun
If substance come forth out of sorrow
If story or song bear fruit
Hands, hearts and minds must labor
With knowledge of pain at the root
(1) Comment by Himring for Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pai...
Wise words--your song bears fruit!
I like how you have connected the Trees to the "root" in your prompt and woven all these themes together.
Re: (1) Comment by Himring for Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pai...
Thank you so much!
(2) Comment by Lyra for Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pain K...
Oh, I love this. It feels like a song - I wish I knew the tune! What a great use of the prompt!
Re: (2) Comment by Lyra for Núvë Nwalma Nólë (Root Pain K...
Thank you so much!
If it ends up with a tune, I'll post it
What a marvelous use of the…
What a marvelous use of the prompt! (I am woeful at commenting on poetry, so I retreat into admiring how you've woven the prompt into verse.)