Very interesting and surprisingly well-done...fanfic poetry all too often means slapdash and lack of effort, but this shows at least some thought and care was put into it.  I especially like how you gave the two divine sisters the opposing personalities in terms of order and disorder...hehe, Yavanna was especially amusing.

I love these!  Really, I have nothing useful to say.  You give Varda and Yavanna so much character without diminishing their vastness, and the imagery is so beautiful.  The contrast between Varda and Yavanna too works so well.  Thank you!  Will there be more?