Like Mother, Like Son by oshun
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Summary: Day 18 of the Back to Middle-earth Month challenge. Prompt: “your character is in bed and he or she awakes to a future leader, heir, or current leader standing outside the window, staring into your character's face with a giant smile.” Summary: Fëanor is in the dog house, but his heir does not mind. A double drabble (200 words as counted by MS Word).
Major Characters: Fëanor, Maedhros, Nerdanel Major Relationships: Genre: General Challenges: B2MeM 2009 Rating: General Warnings: This fanwork belongs to the series |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 191 |
Posted on 18 March 2009 | Updated on 18 March 2009 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Like Mother, Like Son
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Fëanáro had not slept for three days. He crawled into his matrimonial bed and nuzzled his nose into Nerdanel’s wild red hair. A sharp elbow jabbed his rib cage. She’d get over it. She always did.
“You stink. You could have at least shown the courtesy of bathing.”
“I took a sponge bath!” He tried to use his most penitent voice.
“It was far from sufficient,” she replied.
“How’s Nelyafinwë?”
“I’m impressed. You remember the name of your only son. We can only hope that he remembers you.”
He tried to insert a knee between her thighs, but her legs clamped tightly shut. Too exhausted to pursue a course that undoubtedly would take a level of finesse that he did not possess, he rolled over and fell instantly asleep.
He awakened several hours later, with the light of Laurelin streaming over the bed. Outside the window, a small face surrounded by flame-red hair beamed at him.
“Atto!” he crowed. “You were making funny noises. Can I come in?” The boy was already clambering over the low windowsill.
“Come here,” Fëanáro said, pulling the tiny body into his arms.
“You smell funny too.”
“And you, Nelyo, sound exactly like your mother.”
(1) Comment by Rhapsody for Like Mother, Like Son
I really like this short peek into the lives of Fëanor with his young family. Hah, Nerdanel being miffed already with his attention to his craft, but Fëanor sounds eerily alike my better half hehe. What a wonderful take on this prompt!
Re: (1) Comment by Rhapsody for Like Mother, Like Son
Thank you. I really like doing young Fëanor with his family. And enjoyed doing Nerdanel.
(2) Comment by SurgicalSteel for Like Mother, Like Son
*snorts* This was funny, and so very - oh, I do love Nerdanel in this!
Re: (2) Comment by SurgicalSteel for Like Mother, Like Son
Thank you.. So hlad you like Nerdanel, I figure she had to be pretty strong-willed to get involved with him in the first place and stay with him as long as she did.
(3) Comment by Robinka for Like Mother, Like Son
I can so see such a situation hapen ;) Very nice. Thanks a lot!
Re: (3) Comment by Robinka for Like Mother, Like Son
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Binka! Happy to have made you smile.
(4) Comment by Angelica for Like Mother, Like Son
Such a sweet ficlet, and a great use of the prompt. Nerdanel is great, it's easy to see why Feanor fell in love with her.
Re: (4) Comment by Angelica for Like Mother, Like Son
Thank you. So happy you liked Nerdanel. I cannot see her as passive, to have won and held his love, and particularly as she is described as not being conventionally beautiful either.
(5) Comment by whitewave for Like Mother, Like Son
Very sweet and enjoyed reading and re-reading this. I loved all of Nerdanel's lines! She is really her husband's match and so typical of him to "make the moves" even at such delicate times. Little Maitimo is adorable as well.
Re: (5) Comment by whitewave for Like Mother, Like Son
Thank you! I do like to think that Nedanel had to have been spunky.
(6) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Like Mother, Like Son
This is adorable! Although, mean person that I am, I like best Nerdanel thwarting Feanaro. He deserves it! >:^)
Re: (6) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Like Mother, Like Son
Thanks. I was thinking how I would have reacted; wouldn't cared what briliant thing he was doing. (But then I was never married to a genius, only someone who thinks he is.)
(7) Comment by Independence1776 for Like Mother, Like Son
*laughs* Such a cute moment.
(8) Comment by Olorime for Like Mother, Like Son
How lovely!
:)
I love Nerdanel here. :D