I agree that Audre Lord's poem has Rog vibes.

I really like how you characterize Rog here and particularly the description of his relations with the other members of his House!

He handles Maeglin's anxieties really well, too.

The world you've created here is so lively! I really enjoyed the OCs even in their brief appearances.

This version of Rog ♡♡♡ I adore how strong and steady he is here, but how he also has the capability to be more fiery. I wonder how things might have turned out if Lómion had spent more time with him.

I am always happy to see more Rog, not to mention more Maeglin!

And both of them seem so sensible here...