O Sing! by Lferion
Fanwork Notes
Written for the SWG October 2021 Gnome Tome challenge.
The prompts I used were:
-- "IRON is always IRON"
-- "sang before they could speak"
-- Eru answered: "Let the houseless be re-housed!"
Many thanks to Zhie and Runa for encouragement & sanity-checking.
Posted here on AO3.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Singing into being, a drabble-poem Major Characters: Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, Poetry Challenges: Gnome Tome Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 104 |
Posted on 28 October 2021 | Updated on 28 October 2021 |
This fanwork is complete. |
O Sing!
Read O Sing!
Oh, sing a song of iron, obdurate and strong
Of carbon making steel, enchained in crystal long
Wrought or poured or forgéd, shaped by ringing song
Iron ne'er not iron, rightly used or wrong.
Oh sing a song of Speakers, joy in chorus raised
Counterpoint and melody, on starry reaches gazed
Harmony and rhythm expressing hearts amazed
Words came after Music, creation to be praised
Oh sing a song of Making, of lamps and pillars bright
Of stars and stones and vessels, shaped from fulgent light
Feär seeking hroär, form enfolding might
The houseless now re-housed, beloved in our sight
Oh, loved this! It gave me…
Oh, loved this!
It gave me very clear images while reading!
Well sung!
Well sung!
Oh my word! This is…
Oh my word! This is marvelous! What a beautiful flow. I love the creation theme running through. Very clever on many levels. Thank you!
Wonderful poem! I love how…
Wonderful poem! I love how you made the three promts in the three verses into a whole.
I could....
....hear the hammers ringing. Very evocative.