Four Times Nelyo by Robinka
Fanwork Notes
You may know that I am a devoted fan of the Sindar, but from time to time I need to embrace my inner Noldork ;). Thank you so much to Himring for beta-reading and help.
Fanwork Information
Summary: A set of drabbles. The title says it all. Major Characters: Maedhros Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, General Challenges: Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 4 | Word Count: 406 |
Posted on 14 October 2011 | Updated on 14 October 2011 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Burning Bridges
Originally written in April 2009.
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The wind carries the skull-squeezing hiss of boiling water and the fluttering laments of the sails, once white, that are rapidly losing their battle. The waves and flames, like greedy hands, crash proud masts and pull them beneath the roaring hell, into the calm abyss.
Where I stand, at the point of no return, frozen by the heat blazing straight in my face, I can feel their fierceness, yet no word of regret slips out between my clenched teeth. The smoke stings my eyes; I swallow the tears that can soothe neither my scorched throat nor my spirit on fire.
Truly Dispossessed
Originally written in June 2008 for my friend Vlad.
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I owe and own nothing, even my life, of which I was in charge for as long as I care to remember. Twilight wreathes me as I look around and try to learn to breathe fresh air again.
They claim I discarded what was not mine. How can they be right? This inheritance of blood that belonged solely to me, only I could give away freely, without remorse, to atone for the hard truth. They yell at me that I provoked anarchy heedless of their protests.
I am dispossessed, and now I wonder whether I will still possess their hearts.
Suicide Is Painless
Originally written in June 2007 for my friend Vlad.
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With my brothers, allies, and desires gone, I embrace the scorching heart of Arda and hold it close to my own, for within its ever-blazing core I seek hope and deliverance. I let it burn away my remorse and the bitter remembrance of my grave and unpardonable deeds. As my exhausted, forever-marred body turns to ashes, I feel the power that rekindles my spirit and raises it to a sublime state of purification and forgiveness.
Have no fear, stranger passing by. Dry your eyes. The hissing flames cannot harm me. Nothing is more elemental to the son of a self-consumed fire.
Undertow
Brand new one.
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There are many things that have remained the same, just as I remember them. Especially in Valinor, where time is of no importance and the memories of my kind are cherished for elsewhere we are only ghosts of the distant past. The softness of the grass underneath my palms, the mellow light of the early afternoon, the rich taste of the wine, and the mischievous glint in Fingon's eyes when I look upon him – everything seems the same, though the tingling in my right hand is somewhat new to me.
Nothing is forgotten – even I, one of the damned.
(1) Comment by Erulisse for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 1]
A really nice quartet exploration of your Noldork (and my own as well). Thanks for sharing these with us.
- Erulisse (one L)
Re: (1) Comment by Erulisse for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 1]
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Glad that you liked them :)
(2) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Binka, I was so excited to see your name again on the Most Recent list! And these drabbles are absolutely gorgeous! The language is poetic and eloquent, and you pack a lot of power into few words. The closing lines of the third drabble were my favorites, although I think the whole series is really quite spectacular.
Re: (2) Comment by Dawn Felagund for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Yes, it's been a while since I wrote anything. I'm very happy that you like the drabbles! :D Thank you so much for your kind words.
(3) Comment by Himring for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Glad to see you've posted them!
I've already told you that I think they are very good--and now I think they work really well as a quartet!
Re: (3) Comment by Himring for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Thank you! I'm so happy that you think so :) I do appreciate your help, reading and reviewing!
(4) Comment by Rhapsody for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Oeeh a new piece from my favourite author. Melancholy with a bitter undertone, it feels as if he wants to enjoy and yet the past will always be there, never leaving him. Wonderful stuff Binks!
Re: (4) Comment by Rhapsody for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Thank you for reading! I'm happy that you liked it. :)
(5) Comment by Ugly Duchess for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
All these little stories are so touching...
Re: (5) Comment by Ugly Duchess for Four Times Nelyo [Ch 4]
Thank you so, so much!